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时间:2016-07-13
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在刚刚结束的7月9日雅思写作考试中,雅思官方再次在大作文环节考查了“教育类”的题目。看来最近“教育类”考题热度不减。今天,我们留学监理网的老师将给大家带来雅思大作文的深度解析和范文。
本次考试题目如下:
There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
这道题是一道双边论证的老题。本题的背景是现在有很多针对儿童的广告,例如零食、玩具等。家长感觉广告商是在给孩子施压,而广告商则认为广告提供了有用的信息。
Sample Response
There has been a heated debate between parents and advertisers towards the increasing children-aimed advertisements. I am going to analyze and give my own opinion in this essay.
Parents claim that the advertisers put their children under pressure. Children are too young to tell the right from wrong and are more prone to be influenced or attracted by the advertisements. Many children try very hard to persuade their parents to buy them the toys shown in advertisements. If their children don’t have the latest toy, the other kids may push them aside. As a consequence, those kids would suffer from loneliness and peer pressure. Gradually, it will have a negative effect on children’s mental health and interpersonal skills. So parents are strongly against those advertisements aiming at children.
On the other hand, the advertisers defend themselves and believe they provide useful information for both children and parents. The advertisers think that advertisements of products like guidance books can benefit all the children especially when they struggle with their studies. After the launch of those advertisements, many children have done better in the exams. Without such information, some children may have lost the chance to have a good academic achievement. So the advertisers claim their products are beneficial.
In my opinion, both parents and advertisers’ views make sense. But there are many fake and defective products in the market and those products can be a hazard for children’s health, mental, behavioral and personal development. I believe it’s the government’s obligation to standardize the contents of advertisements and limit the frequency shown on TV.
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