托福写作之年轻人的作为（附例文）

在托福写作中，我们注意到题目中会经常出现一些时间相关的关键词。在这类题目中，有一类是关于今昔对比类的题目，这类题目往往是把过去和现在的一些事物进行对比。今天，老师就和大家分享托福写作今昔对比之年轻人的作为。

　　例题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays are more likely to make time and efforts to improve the world than young people in the past.同意与否：现在的年轻人比过去更愿意花时间和精力去改善世界。

　　这道题目对比的是今昔的年轻人对改善世界的态度和作为。我们都知道年轻人是一个国家科学技术发展的源动力，年轻人代表了很多的特点。但是如果从今昔对比来看的话，我们可能对过去年轻人的作为并不了解，但是，我们可以根据今昔环境的不同来解答题目。

　　首先，将今昔对比的问题，从社会背景出发，进行细化。

　　今昔对比类的问题比较容易困惑考生的是，不知道从哪里入手来写。那么，我们就把今昔对比中的大环境细化一下：经济、科技、教育、环境、交通、观念、法律等都是随着社会环境的改变而转变的一些方面。

　　其次，在细化的分类中，找出和题目相关的小话题。

　　因为题目是比较的年轻人对改善世界的作为，那么，教育、科技、经济、观念等都是和年轻人改善世界挂钩的。其中，因为教育体制的不同，人们对年轻人的要求不同，不再是单一的学习，而是多栖发展;科技的发展，给了年轻人更多好的想法，提高了年轻人做事的效率;经济的话，现在有很多大学生创业，政府这边是有帮扶的，这样就给了很多有想法的年轻人一个展示的平台。

　　最后，梳理一下这篇文章的行文思路

　　1)年轻人不再只是以学习为主要目标，还关注国家或者国际事情;

　　2)学校里有很多的课外活动，帮助学生接触和了解社会;

　　3)国家对年轻人的关注度更多，使得年轻人更有动力来改善世界。

　　参考范文：

　　There is a discussion about that whether young people nowadays are more likely to make time and efforts to improve the world than young people in the past. I hold the view that current young people exert themselves more on improving the world than young people in the past.

　　Firstly, the goals for young people nowadays in not just study. In the past, the only goal for young people was study. Parents put much pressure on the study of young people. As an old Chinese saying goes "pay no attention on what is going on beyond one's study and bury oneself in the classics", this depicts the condition of young people in the past. In the 2 1st centuries, young people also care about world affairs and they think about how to improve the world. Its young people, just stay at home regardless of what is going on outside, they will fall behind others with the passing of time.

　　Secondly, young people nowadays participate more on activities that improve the world. In the past, young people had less chance to take part in social activities. With the development of technology such as social media, young people can easily participate in discussing social affairs, political cases and even world affairs. Young people are the backbone of the society and they bear the hope of the future. With these advantaged prerequisite, more and more young people are willing to improve the world.

　　Last but not Least, the country pay more attention on young people and this makes more and more young people willing to make time to improve the world. From the global perspective, no matter on the marketplace or political arena, young people, as a new force, let more people see their efforts. The government also provides more chances to support the young people. Such as the "Youth Venture Fund" It is not only an admirable chance for the development of young people themselves, but also a huge development for the whole society wills this trend, more and more young people show their enthusiasm for social activities and they do have positive influences on some matters.

　　In a word, from the personal and national perspective, young people nowadays are more likely to take time and efforts to improve the world than young people in the past.

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