美国留学MBA申请文书中的三大错误点，千万不要犯!

众所周知，MBA作为美国大学商科领域的重要分支，该专业的申请竞争压力一直非常激烈，而大家想要在众多申请者中脱颖而出，除了必要的托福成绩、GPA分数等硬性指标之外，留学文书的作用不能忽视。下面留学监理网的小编来为大家分享美国留学MBA申请文书中的三大错误点，希望引起大家注意。

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MBA，全称Master of Business   Administration，翻译为中文则为工商管理硕士。MBA起初诞生于美国，经过百年的探索和努力，它培养了为数众多的优秀工商管理人才，创造了美国经济发展的神话和奇迹。MBA被誉为"天之骄子"和“管理精英”，成为企业界乃至社会敬重和羡慕的特殊人物，甚至在公众心目中被视为“商界英雄”。

而想要写出一份漂亮的，让美国大学招生官满意的MBA留学申请文书，那下面这三大错误点，一定要避免：

美国留学MBA申请文书中的错误点1：实践经历与个人成长分离

这是很多申请美国MBA的学生最开始时经常犯的错误，忽视了物、我两者的平衡。物，可以理解为课外活动、实习经历、志愿者经历及工作经历。我，理解为活动及经历中的收获、反思及成长。比如要求申请者写一次活动或者印象   深刻的经历，很多申请者的文章通篇写某此活动的时间、地点、内容，我担任什么职务，做了什么。这样写是不合适的，因为美国学校更看重的是MBA申请人作为一个“人”，你是否善于从过往经验中吸取经验教训，是否有独立的判断及思考能力，通过这个活动经历看出想去国外读MBA的你有哪方面的品质。

美国留学MBA申请文书中的错误点2：整篇文章“形、神”分离

本科和研究生申请者的文书中有不同的表现。比如，本科申请者文书内容中太多散文化的心理描写、太少过往实际经历，导致文章太空洞。美国MBA本科申请者要明确的是申请文书本质上是要体现自身能力和素质，因此扎实的内容是基础，在此基础上，来寻求文章表达方式和内容的统一。

美国留学MBA申请文书中的错误点3：各种素材主次不分

例如有一个学生到美国MBA留学申请应用数学的研究生，经历比较丰富，大学时是学校活动的积极参与者和组织者，比如十佳社团组织者、校园歌手之类，专业课成绩也   很优秀。但是作为一个理工科的申请者，仅有这些是远远不够的。了解到学生在大二时，参加过一次针对西南地区媒体生存状况的调查，而调查中，学生作为唯一数学专业的学生，负责数据的统计与模型分析。申请学生认为当时的工作比较简单，所以没有放在文书中，这显然是在舍本逐末。

作为理工科研究生申请者，建议学生重点需要在文书中突出专业能力和专业实习经验，这些比社团或歌手等活动重要的多。

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明白了上面这些内容之后，为了保证大家更多的准备出一份漂亮的达标的美国留学申请文书，下面随小编一起来看下美国大学对MBA专业最新的文书题目要求：

2017年哈佛大学商学院MBA专业申请文书题目

ESSAY

There is one question for the Class of 2019:

As we review your application, what more would you like us to know as we   consider your candidacy for the Harvard Business School MBA program?

There is no word limit for this question. We think you know what guidance   we’re going to give here. Don’t overthink, overcraft and overwrite. Just answer   the question in clear language that those of us who don’t know your world can   understand.

LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION QUESTIONS

How do the candidate’s performance, potential, background, or personal   qualities compare to those of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles?   Please provide specific examples. (300 words)

Please describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have   given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant’s   response. (250 words)

2017年哥伦比亚大学商学院MBA专业申请文书题目

哥伦比亚大学商学院是美国顶级商学院，哥大商学院申请者必须回答一个简短的问题以及提交3篇Essay。

以下内容摘自哥伦比亚大学商学院官网：

Essays

Applicants must complete one short answer question and three essays.

Short Answer Question:

What is your immediate post-MBA professional goal? (51 characters   maximum)

Examples of possible responses:

“Work in business development for a media company.”

“Join a strategy consulting firm.”

“Launch a data-management start-up.”

Essay 1:

Through your resume and recommendations, we have a clear sense of your   professional path to date. What are your career goals going forward, and how   will the Columbia MBA help you achieve them? (100-750 words)

Essay 2:

Columbia Business School’s students participate in industry focused New York   immersion seminars; in project based Master Classes; and in school year   internships. Most importantly, our students are taught by a combination of   distinguished research faculty and accomplished practitioners. How will you take   advantage of being “at the very center of business”? (100-500 words)

Essay 3:

CBS Matters, a key element of the School’s culture, allows the people in your   Cluster to learn more about you on a personal level. What will your Clustermates   be pleasantly surprised to learn about you? (100-250 words)

Optional Essay:

An optional fourth essay will allow you to discuss any issues that do not   fall within the purview of the required essays.

推荐信

We ask recommenders to consider the following guidelines when writing their   recommendations (recommended limit - 1000 words):

How do the candidate's performance, potential, background, or personal   qualities compare to those of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles?   Please provide specific examples.

Please describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have   given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant's   response.

2017年密歇根大学安娜堡商学院MBA专业申请文书题目

ESSAYS

What are you most proud of and why? How does it shape who you are today? (400   words)

What is your desired career path and why? (400 words)

TEAM EXERCISE

Not required but highly recommended

LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION QUESTIONS

(only one letter required)

1.How do the candidate’s performance, potential, or personal qualities   compare to those of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles? Please   provide specific examples. (300 words)

2.Please describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have   given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant’s   response. (250 words).

2017年麻省理工学院MBA专业申请文书题目

ESSAYS

Cover Letter: Please submit a cover letter seeking a place in the MIT Sloan   MBA Program. Your letter should conform to a standard business correspondence   and be addressed to Mr. Rod Garcia, Senior Director of Admissions. (250 words or   fewer)

Resume: Please submit a resume that includes your employment history and   academic record in reverse chronological order. Other information appropriate to   a business resume is welcomed and encouraged. (no more than 1 page in   length)

LETTERS OF RECOMMENDATION

MBA applicants must submit two letters of recommendation. Please choose   recommenders who are able to provide specific answers to the following   questions:

1.How long and in what capacity have you known the applicant?

2.How does the applicant stand out from others in a similar capacity?

3.Please give an example of the applicant’s impact on a person, group, or   organization.

4.Please give a representative example of how the applicant interacts with   other people.

5.Which of the applicant’s personal or professional characteristics would you   change?

6.If you are an academic/technical recommender, please tell us how well the   applicant mastered the subject you taught or supervised and in what ways did the   applicant demonstrate this mastery.

7.Please tell us anything else you think we should know about this   applicant.

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